Ted Sorensen on Abraham Lincoln: A Man of His Words
Kennedy advisor Ted Sorensen finds that of all the U.S. presidents, Lincoln had the best speechwriter—himself
- By Theodore C. Sorensen
- Smithsonian magazine, October 2008, Subscribe
Abraham Lincoln, the greatest American president, was also in my view the best of all presidential speechwriters. As a youngster in Lincoln, Nebraska, I stood before the statue of the president gracing the west side of the towering state capitol and soaked up the words of his Gettysburg Address, inscribed on a granite slab behind the statue.
Two decades later, in January 1961, President-elect John F. Kennedy asked me to study those words again, in preparing to help him write his inaugural address. He also asked me to read all previous 20th-century inaugural addresses. I did not learn much from those speeches (except for FDR's first inaugural), but I learned a great deal from Lincoln's ten sentences.
Now, 47 years later, as another tall, skinny, oratorically impressive Illinois lawyer is invoking Lincoln as he pursues his own candidacy for president, and with Lincoln's bicentennial underway (he turns 200 February 12, 2009), I want to acknowledge my debt.
Lincoln was a superb writer. Like Jefferson and Teddy Roosevelt, but few if any other presidents, he could have been a successful writer wholly apart from his political career. He needed no White House speechwriter, as that post is understood today. He wrote his major speeches out by hand, as he did his eloquent letters and other documents. Sometimes he read his draft speeches aloud to others, including members of his cabinet and his two principal secretaries, John Hay and John Nicolay, and he occasionally received suggestions, particularly at the start of his administration, from his onetime rival for the presidency, Secretary of State William Seward. On the first occasion on which Seward offered a major contribution—Lincoln's first inaugural—the president demonstrated clearly that he was the better speechwriter. Seward's idea was worthy, principally a change in the ending, making it softer, more conciliatory, invoking shared memories. But his half-completed proposed wording, often cited by historians, was pedestrian: "The mystic chords which proceeding from so many battle fields and so many patriot graves pass through all the hearts . . . in this broad continent of ours will yet again harmonize in their ancient music when breathed upon by the guardian angel of the nation."
Lincoln graciously took and read Seward's suggested ending, but, with the magic of his own pen, turned it into his moving appeal to "the mystic chords of memory," which, "stretching from every battlefield and patriot grave to every living heart and hearthstone all over this broad land, will yet swell the chorus of the Union, when again touched, as surely they will be, by the better angels of our nature."
Lincoln was a better speechwriter than speaker. Normally, the success of a speech depends in considerable part on the speaker's voice and presence. The best speeches of John F. Kennedy benefited from his platform presence, his poise, personality, good looks and strong voice. William Jennings Bryan moved audiences not only with the extravagance of his language, but also with the skill of his movements and gestures, the strength of his voice and appearance. Democratic Party leaders not attending the 1896 National Convention at which Bryan delivered his "Cross of Gold" speech, and thus not carried away by the power of his presence, later could not understand his nomination on the basis of what they merely read. Franklin Roosevelt's speeches, for those who were not present for his performance, were merely cold words on a page with substantially less effect than they had for those who were present to hear them.
But Lincoln's words, heard by comparatively few, by themselves carried power across time and around the world. I may have been more moved by his remarks at the Gettysburg cemetery when I read them behind his statue at the state capitol in Lincoln in 1939 than were some of those straining to hear them on the outskirts of the audience at Gettysburg in 1863. The Massachusetts statesman Edward Everett, with his two-hour speech filled with classical allusions, had been the designated orator of the day. The president was up and quickly down with his dedicatory remarks in a few short minutes. Some newspapers reported: "The President also spoke."
Lincoln's voice, reportedly high, was not as strong as Bryan's, nor were his looks as appealing as Kennedy's. (Lincoln himself referred to his "poor, lean, lank face.") His reading was not electronically amplified nor facilitated by a teleprompter, which today almost every president uses to conceal his dependence on a prepared text. (Why? Would we have more confidence in a surgeon or a plumber who operated without referring to his manual? Do we expect our presidents to memorize or improvise their most important speeches?) Lincoln also spoke with a Midwestern inflection that—in those days, before mass media created a homogenized national audience and accent—was not the way folks talked in Boston or New York, making him difficult for some audiences to understand.
But Lincoln's success as an orator stemmed not from his voice, demeanor or delivery, or even his presence, but from his words and his ideas. He put into powerful language the nub of the matter in the controversy over slavery and secession in his own time, and the core meaning for all time of this nation itself as "this last best hope of earth." Such great and moving subjects produce many more great and moving speeches than discussions of tax cuts and tariffs.
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Comments (18)
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Posted by Lexium on February 9,2013 | 07:31 AM
This was a brilliant article, but for decades we have come to expect no less from the wordsmithing abilities of Sorenson. His analysis of the Presidential speech compositions through-the-ages is impressive. I also admire the abilities of the great Richard Goodwin - his 'WORK OF OUR HANDS' speech (of RFK) is a string-of-pearls; Although my political views differ from hers, the graceful writing style of Peggy Noonan is also beautiful and noteworthy. I'm afraid most of the rest of the Presidential speech scripts - though vibrant they may have been at the time of their delivery - today, do not stand well. They read (and recordings / when available)as mostly hollow details, rare or dim lights, boring stats and just simply typing.
Posted by Audrey Burtrum-Stanley on September 16,2011 | 11:48 PM
it is well...!
Posted by John Edwin on September 11,2011 | 12:12 AM
President Lincoln had the combined gifts of perspicacity and perspicuity. Add to this his extensive knowledge, in depth wisdom (mostly gained by his sufferings), good old fashion common sense, and a real sense of humor, is what made him a very unique speaker and president in our American experience. The pathos and gravity of Civil War surrounding his Presidency completed the portrait of a life never to be repeated.
Posted by Patrick on August 3,2011 | 08:01 PM
I would have 2 say that Abraham Lincoln ROCKS!! And he should of never been assassinated cause he would of done a lot more.
Posted by Bob on January 12,2010 | 10:45 PM
abranham licoln was a very very good man he was a smart man at that. He did his best to try to free the slaves and do every thing in his power to stop slaver that why i want to post a comment about abranhan thank you very much for being a good good man.
Posted by ebone on December 7,2009 | 11:51 AM
Uhhh, Yobee, is it? If you really respect Mr. Lincoln and his words, then honor them. How about we begin with these, "With malice toward none, with charity for all."
To do that Yobee, you are going to have to speak with a little more respect A) about the dead and B) for your former leaders....especially if you stand proudly as a citizen of these United States.
In doing this, we honor Mr Lincoln AND his wordsmith legacy. By showing it the respect it deserves.
Posted by Trish Nichols on November 21,2009 | 05:59 AM
you are simply greattttttttttttt
Posted by shano on August 27,2009 | 11:42 AM
Mentioning Reagan in the same breath as Lincoln is enough to cause one to shudder, with the exception of perhaps comparing them as utter opposites.
Lincoln was a largely self-taught intellectual, experience wise, humble, thoughtful and compassionate.
Reagan was not.
Sorensen is writing about Lincoln's mastery of writing and communication, not his ability to read someone else's thoughts from a teleprompter. It's kind of the point of the entire article.
Posted by Yobee Ziskey on June 21,2009 | 06:11 PM
Thank you, Mr. Sorensen. Having been born almost 100 years too late to have known Mr. Lincoln personally, I have had only his writings with which to get to know his inner thoughts and beliefs. Lincoln's actions spoke volumes, but his writings explain the reasoning behind his actions. I have always been impressed, touched, and moved when reading Lincoln's words. Clearly he was our greatest president, perhaps an equal with George Washington in that achievement. But more evident is that he was somehow touched or ordained by God to lead and save this country from itself. Few people have had Lincoln's depth of though, clarity of position and purpose, and reverent humility. In my view, three presidents have lead this country to new (or renewed) levels of greatness: George Washington, Abraham Lincoln, and Ronald Reagan. I pray that it doesn't take another hundred years for our next "greatest" leader to be elected.
Posted by Richard Teasdale on April 7,2009 | 11:24 PM
As a US history teacher, I was interested in convincing Sorenson to comment upon the opinion of some historians that he plagiarized Chief Justice Oliver Wendall Holmes while writing Kennedy's Inaugural Address and why Kennedy did write his own speeches, or any other modern president. How disappointing for American voters to discover that many presidents rely upon others for their words of inspiration.
Posted by Robyn E. Williams on February 19,2009 | 02:18 PM
I can't believe you don't mention President Reagan's oratory skills too. Is it because he was a Republican like President Lincoln and MLK? Biased much?
Posted by FeFe on February 16,2009 | 04:30 PM
I congratulate Ted Sorensen on his writing for this interesting article and for his wonderful contributions to President Kennedy's Inaugural Address. Lincoln may well have been the pricipal writer of his own material, but some historians feel that John Hay also assisted his President with first drafts from time to time. Some feel that Hay was the actual author of the famous "Bixby Letter" in Lincoln's handwriting to the Massachusetts mother of five sons lost in battle. Even if that is true, however, Lincoln's poetic genius truly "belongs to the ages."
Posted by Dennis O'Brien on February 8,2009 | 12:30 AM
Abraham Lincoln is proof that genius can be entirely self taught: with no formal education, Lincoln read law, and practiced law; he read the great writers of the English language, from Chaucer to Shakespeare, from Washington Irving to Nathaniel Hawthorne, and it shows in his writing. How succinct, how poignant, how precise his words are in the Gettysburg address; the economy of words, the depth of meaning, sincerity, honesty; he had an incredible talent for the written word! Both inaugural speeches are also masterpieces; the second shows how his genius and craft evolved during the four moving years of the Civil War. Abraham Lincoln is my favorite American President, and through his vision of what America should be, unified, one, without the institution of slavery, equal, made America what it now is. No assassin's bullet can take him away from us. To quote his friend Stanton, "He now belongs to the Ages". --James Zaworski, 2009
Posted by James Zaworski on January 5,2009 | 10:39 AM
God bless Lincoln. After spending my life in the service, and ending up in a wheel chair with MS, have learned to live with the attitude, 'It could be worse." Stu
Posted by Stu Samsel on November 16,2008 | 11:59 AM
Lincoln was great writer and speaker who matched his words with action. Words and action. That made him great!
Posted by Dodjie on November 10,2008 | 10:54 PM
what would say about what abe wanted to prove other than equality for others?
Posted by samantha- student for the essay on November 9,2008 | 07:38 PM
Is Mr. Sorensen familiar with "Kirkham's Grammar", which claims to be "The Book That Shaped Lincoln's Prose"? Being a distant relative to the Kirkham who wrote the book, I've always wondered whether the claim is true. The ISBN for the book is 0-87243-243-2. I would much appreciate hearing back from Mr. Sorensen or anyone else on this topic.
Posted by Bob Kirkham on October 26,2008 | 11:44 AM
Lincoln was not only his own researcher, but of course, was largely self-taught. He may have quoted the Bible sparingly, but was capable of quoting large passages (despite the fact that he could not accept the promise of an afterlife). His knowledge of Plato, Aristotle and other classical scholars came from an unending thirst for knowledge. He was able to synthesize the great concepts of the past and apply them with wisdom - and with beautiful language - to the present. It's a lesson that one could only wish our current leaders could learn. The tough issues we are facing at the moment pale in comparison to those that Lincoln faced. A wonderful essay - it's a shame that Sorensen lets his political persuasion get in the way of not recognizing Ronald Reagan for his communication skills. As a young reporter covering a Reagan speech, I was given an advance copy. I read through it, searching for news. With all apologies to Peggy Noonan, the speech appeared pedestrian on paper. However, when Reagan spoke, he literally breathed life into those words. It was an unforgettable experience.
Posted by Clay Owen on October 7,2008 | 01:15 PM
No matter what one feels about the American Civil War, it has to be said that Lincoln was just plain brilliant.
Posted by Bob Perkins, Florida on October 3,2008 | 12:44 PM
It says something about the character of a nation when in the middle of a Civil War an election for President was held. Being a southern by birth, I was taught to despise Lincoln and that the "south was right" mentality was running rampant. I even got into reenacting portraying a soldier of the Texas infantry. Now that I am older and hopefully wiser I have learned to admire the man and how he does represent the American spirit. By the way, I still reenact, now as a "surgeon" with a New York regiment even though I am still here in Texas.
Posted by Jim Rice on October 2,2008 | 04:59 PM